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Do you think it's better to be a middle school student than an elementary school student? Explain y

차유진/2024-07-30

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I think it's not better to be a middle school student than elementary school student because grow up then studying is difficult and have a lot of homework.
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Good evening, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good one there!  


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                        Do you think it's better to be a middle school student than an elementary school student? Explain your answer.


I think it's not better to be a middle school student than elementary school student because grow up then studying is difficult and have a lot of homework.
>> I think it's not better to be a middle school student than an elementary school student because growing up means studying and having a lot of homework, which are both difficult. 
>> OR: I think it's better to be an elementary school student than a middle school student because growing up means studying harder and having a lot of homework. 
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