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김지숙/2024-07-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My favorite thing at school is meeting friends and eating school meals because it's so fun to talk to friends and school meals are delicious, so it gives me strength when I study.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Your writing is getting better, especially your sentence structure and use of connectors. Focus on expanding your vocabulary and varying sentence lengths in your writing.
- Teacher Angela

My favorite thing at school is meeting friends and eating school meals because it's so fun to talk to friends and school meals are delicious, so it gives me strength when I study.
>> My favorite things about school are meeting friends and eating school meals. It's so fun to talk with friends, and the school meals are delicious, which gives me strength when I study
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