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류건우/2024-07-30

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Q: What makes night activities different from the morning ones? A: I think the biggest difference between those is the ambiance. I'm not very sure of it, but I think people usually feel differently even if they do the same thing if the time changes. So the ambiance of night can change people's emotions.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for your effort in doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I think the biggest difference between those is the ambiance.
>>I think the biggest difference between the two is the ambiance.

2. I'm not very sure of it, but I think people usually feel differently even if they do the same thing if the time changes.
>>I'm not very sure of it, but I think people feel differently depending on the time, if they do the same things.

3. So the ambiance of night can change people's emotions.
>>So, the ambiance of the night can change people's emotions.


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