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How does community involvement contribute to reducing crime?

박소은/2024-07-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Inform people of the seriousness of the dangers of late nights and install streetlights in remote areas.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good afternoon, Anna!
I totally agree on the importance of warning people about the dangers of being out late. Let's always stay safe!
~Kelly^^
Inform people of the seriousness of the dangers of late nights and install streetlights in remote areas.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Raise awareness about the dangers of staying out late at night and install streetlights in remote areas for increased safety.
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