ȿ/2024-07-29
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Yeon Hee,
Well done! You are almost there. Lets talk about the corrections later. ^^
-Teacher Ash
I catch-up my friends on each birthday.
>>I catch up with my friends on each of their birthdays.
Laid-back mindset reduces the mistakes.
>> A laid-back mindset reduces mistakes.
I feel calmness when I organize my messy room.
>> I feel calm when I organize my messy room.
There's no chance to socialize new people.
>> There's no chance to socialize with new people.
The frequency of eating out has decreased since COVID.
>> CORRECT