Hi Yeon Hee,

Well done! You are almost there. Let’s talk about the corrections later. ^^

-Teacher Ash

I catch-up my friends on each birthday.

>>I catch up with my friends on each of their birthdays.

Laid-back mindset reduces the mistakes.

>> A laid-back mindset reduces mistakes.

I feel calmness when I organize my messy room.

>> I feel calm when I organize my messy room.

There's no chance to socialize new people.

>> There's no chance to socialize with new people.

The frequency of eating out has decreased since COVID.

>> CORRECT