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Have you ever become an athlete?

김명기/2024-07-29

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When I was young, I was a fast runner. I liked working out, but that was all. I was not good at applied sports, such as soccer. So, I didn't think about wanting to be an athlete.

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Hello Myeong Ki!

Thank you for doing your homework.

T. Aki~

When I was young, I was a fast runner.

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OR >> I used to run fast when I was young.

I liked working out, but that was all.

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OR >>> i enjoyed working out, but that was about i

I was not good at applied sports, such as soccer.

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OR >> I wasn't skilled at team sports like soccer,

So, I didn't think about wanting to be an athlete.

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OR >> So the idea of becoming an athlete never crossed my mind