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What activities do you like doing in nice weather?

정하윤/2024-07-27

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I usually ride a bike in nice weather. Nowadays i’m so busy so I can’t ride a bike often. but when i was young when it’s a sunny day, I usually rode a bike with my family.

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Hi Jung Ha Yun!

Thank you for doing your homework!

I usually ride a bike in nice weather. Nowadays i’m so busy so I can’t ride a bike often. but when i was young when it’s a sunny day, I usually rode a bike with my family.

>> I usually ride a bike on a nice weather. Nowadays, I’m so busy that I can’t ride a bike often. But when i was young and it’s a sunny day, I usually ride a bike with my family.