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류건우/2024-07-26

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Q: How can you show that you cherish someone? A: I can show I cherish someone by talking a lot or asking a lot. If I ask about a person's opinion about a thing, then that person can feel that I am paying a lot of attention to that person. Also, I can express my worries about that person to show I'm cherishing that person.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework. Enjoy your weekend!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I can show I cherish someone by talking a lot or asking a lot.

>>I can show that I cherish someone by talking to them or asking them a lot.

2. If I ask about a person's opinion about a thing, then that person can feel that I am paying a lot of attention to that person.

>>If I ask about a person's opinion about a thing, then that person can feel that I am paying a lot of attention to him/her.

3. Also, I can express my worries about that person to show I'm cherishing that person.

>>Also, I can express my worries about that person to show that I'm cherishing him/her.