영작교정 첨삭 서비스

현재위치

Home > 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

How do you make sure that you don't get sick?

문도현/2024-07-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I repeatedly wash my hands and clean in my room. I believe that if I don't want to get sick, I should clean near by me. And it also needs to have a biorhythm with the routine of my life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Mun!

Thank you for answering my question.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I repeatedly wash my hands and clean in my room.
>>I repeatedly wash my hands and clean my room.

2. I believe that if I don't want to get sick, I should clean near by me.
>>I believe that if I don't want to get sick, I should clean what's near me.

3. And it also needs to have a biorhythm with the routine of my life.
>>It needs to have a biorhythm with my life routine.

이전글 목록 다음글