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정하윤/2024-07-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

My favorite celebrity is a Damons year. He is a singer who has deep fans. The reason why i like himI because i love his own style music and voice.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Elizabeth!

Thank you for sharing. Also, I believe you feel relaxed when you listen to his songs.

See you later!

~Casey

My favorite celebrity is a Damons year.

>> My favorite celebrity is Damons year.

He is a singer who has deep fans.

>> He is a singer who has a lot of fans.

The reason why i like himI because i love his own style music and voice.

>> I like him because I love his music style and voice.