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장지혁/2024-07-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I bring a tablet computer. It has camera, keyboard, and pencil. I also bring Mechanical pencil, and eraser.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!
I also bring these essentials for work!
~Teacher Selene

I bring a tablet computer.
>>CORRECT
It has camera, keyboard, and pencil.
>>It has a camera, a keyboard, and a pencil.
I also bring Mechanical pencil, and eraser.
>>I also bring my mechanical pencil, and eraser.