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The disadvantages of technology

김길수/2024-07-24

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One of the disadantages of technology is depend on technology. Before i using cellphone(ie in the analog period), i can memory phone number more than 10 phone numbers. But i using the cellphone which is memory phone number, i don`t need to memory by myself. I just search the name who make phonecall in cellphone, then i call it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Tom!

That's true. Sometimes we depend too much on technology to make things easier.

~ Trixia

Content:

One of the disadantages of technology is depend on technology.

- One of the disadvantages of technology is depending on it

Before i using cellphone(ie in the analog period), i can memory phone number more than 10 phone numbers.

- Before I used a cellphone (i.e., in the analog period), I could remember more than 10 phone numbers.

But i using the cellphone which is memory phone number, i don`t need to memory by myself.

- But I'm now using the cellphone, which has a memory phone number; I don't need to memorize it by myself.

I just search the name who make phonecall in cellphone, then i call it.

- I just search for the name of the person on my cellphone, and then I call them.