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Q: What do you think about the status of marriage in Korea right now? A: I think there are just a little marriage in our country right now. According to statistics, there are a lot more elderly than children because people marry less and less children are born. And I think it's not really good situation because a country always need the youngs.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I think there are just a little marriage in our country right now.
>>I think there are just a few marriages in our country right now.

2. According to statistics, there are a lot more elderly than children because people marry less and less children are born.
>>According to statistics, there are a lot more elderly than children because people marry less, and with that, less children are born.

3. And I think it's not really good situation because a country always need the youngs.
>>And I think it's not really a good situation because a country always needs the young ones.