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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eva,
Great job on your homework! Exploring the mixed feelings about meeting new people shows a thoughtful perspective. Meeting new people can be both exciting and scary. It's wise to approach new relationships cautiously; however, remaining open to new experiences can lead to meaningful connections. To enhance your writing further, try using transition words like "however" or "although" to smoothly connect your contrasting thoughts. This will strengthen the flow of your ideas. Keep up the excellent work!
~Teacher Cathy
I don't know that I enjoy meeting
new people.
>>I don't know if I enjoy
meeting new people.
Some time I like meeting new people,
some time l don't like meeting new people.
>>Sometimes I like meeting new
people, sometimes I don't.
I think to meet new people on the
one hand very exciting, on the other very scary.
>>I think meeting new people is
exciting but very scary on the other hand.
Lately we don't belive each other.
>>Lately, we can't trust each
other.
Some time strangers are dangerous.
>>Sometimes strangers are
dangerous.