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good manners in korea

강혜수/2024-07-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

There are some good manners in Korea, First, korean think Confucianism is important. So, if you meet someone who is older than you, using informal words might look like you are disrespectful. Second, if you eat with an old person, you should wait until the old person eat first. Finally, when someone gives you something, taking it with both hands is a good manner.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Iris!

Oh. I've heard that Koreans are really serious about those three. Foreigners in your country should learn them for courtesy.

~ Trixia

Content:

There are some good manners in Korea,

- There are some good manners in Korea.

First, korean think Confucianism is important.

- First, Koreans think Confucianism is important.

So, if you meet someone who is older than you, using informal words might look like you are disrespectful.

- CORRECT.

Second, if you eat with an old person, you should wait until the old person eat first.

- Second, if you eat with an old person, you should wait until the old person eats first.

Finally, when someone gives you something, taking it with both hands is a good manner.

- Finally, when someone gives you something, taking it with both hands is good manners.