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Is the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life?

현무/2024-07-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Not necessarily. Change is needed but sometime need traditional ways .
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Kyle! Thank you for taking the time to do the homework! You've been doing great in the homework you've been doing. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka ^^

Not necessarily. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> That’s not always the case.

Change is needed but sometime need traditional ways .
>> Change is needed, but sometimes traditional ways are still important.
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