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권경희/2024-07-22

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I try to have concern new culture trends, even if I am not good at digital parts. Inside out 2 is related to people's emotions and sympathy. There are many students who are unable to control their emotions.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Ms. Lily!
Indeed, I guess we also need to upgrade our skills if we want to understand the new generation. It might be challenging but if this is the way we can work hand-in-hand, then a change must be capeted and managed.
Aki~

I try to have concern new culture trends, even if I am not good at digital parts.
>>> I try to be concerned with new culture trends, even if I am not good at digital parts.

Inside Out 2 is related to people's emotions and sympathy.
>>> CORRECT!

There are many students who are unable to control their emotions.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Many students are unable to control their emotions.
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