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박소은/2024-07-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think that those with power lose their morality. I feel that corruption occurs and is widespread in society because I believe it is the privilege of the powerful class to take unreasonable profits for their own benefit.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Anna!^^

Thank you for sharing your perspective. It’s true that power can sometimes lead to ethical lapses and corruption. Addressing these issues requires both systemic changes and individual accountability.

~Kelly^^

I think that those with power lose their morality.

>> Correct

OR:

>> I believe that people in positions of power often lose their sense of morality.

I feel that corruption occurs and is widespread in society because I believe it is the privilege of the powerful class to take unreasonable profits for their own benefit.

>> Correct

OR:

>>I feel that corruption is widespread in society because the powerful class often takes unreasonable profits for their own benefit.