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Are you an organized person? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-07-21

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I'm not an organized person because I don't mind if sometimes doesn't prosess as plan I also leave the room messy
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Hello again, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good one!  


Cheers,
Jean~~





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I'm not an organized person because I don't mind if sometimes doesn't prosess as plan I also leave the room mess
>> I'm not an organized person because I don't mind if things sometimes don't go as planned or if I  leave the room a mess.
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