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What was your first day at work like?

신봉규/2024-07-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
my first day at work life was very nervous. I remember being in a rigid posture all day
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you for taking time to do the homework and sharing your experience. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

my first day at work life was very nervous. 
>> My first day at work was very nerve-wracking. 

I remember being in a rigid posture all day
>> CORRECT
OR >> I recall maintaining a stiff posture throughout the entire day.
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