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Describe a photo or work of art in as much detail as possible.

이지윤/2024-07-19

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HAHAHA :) My answer is so long.....sorry....please, attached file. Have a nice this weekend!

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Hello, Yun!
Thank you for describing your favorite photos. I have to say, I was able to picture them in my head.

Chammy

Let me describe my favorite picture. First of all, there is one picture each taken with family and friends.

>> Let me describe my favorite pictures. First, a picture was taken with family and second was with friends.

The family photo is about the experience of traveling during the COVID period.

>> The family photo was about our travel experience during the COVID-19 period.

When I traveled to Seoul, I visited a large aquarium and took a picture with my family in the background of coloful jellyfish.

>> When I traveled to Seoul, I visited a large aquarium and took a picture with my family in the background of colorful jellyfish.

Tall dad and my younger brother in the back, short mom and I looked straight ahead and hugged each other and took pictures.

>>Tall dad and my younger brother were at the back, while my short mom and I looked straight ahead, hugging and taking pictures.

Unfortunately, everyone is wearing a mask because of COVID, so I can't see their whole face.

>> Unfortunately, everyone was wearing a mask because of COVID-29, so I couldn't see their whole faces.

The pictures of friends are about the experience of traveling to celebrate university graduation.

>>The pictures with friends were about the experience of traveling to celebrate our university graduation.

I went on a graduation trip to Taiwan, and I stopped by a delicious mango shaved ice store.

>>Correct

There are photo of food in the center, holding a spoon, and smiling while looking at the camera, and there are photos of people gathering in front of the bed and having a party with the food they bought.

>> There were photos of food in the center, holding a spoon, and smiling while looking at the camera, and there were photos of people gathering in front of the bed and having a party with the food they bought

The party phoeo shows A is wearing animal pajama and headbands, B is wearing sunglasses and pajama, C is wearing one-piece pajama and wrapping her cheeks, and I'm wearing a cute pajama and doing V pose while we jumped up the bed.

>> The party photo shows A wearing animal pajamas and headbands, B wearing sunglasses and pajamas, C wearing one-piece pajama and wrapping her cheeks, and I'm wearing a cute pajama and doing V pose while we jump up the bed.