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Q: Should Greeks restore the Colossus of Rhodes? A: I think need restore the Colossus of Rhodes. Because traveler increase, also expect economy get better.
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Good day, Yeong Min!
You have an excellent point. If we take a look at the old picture, If I am a tourist, and I am in Greece I would love to see the Colossus of Rhodes and admire the magnificent structure. 
Thank you for this!
T. Aki~

 I think need restore the Colossus of Rhodes. 
>>> I think they need to restore the Colossus of Rhodes.


Because traveler increase, also expect economy get better.
>>> Because it can increase tourist that could add to the betterment of their economy
>>> Becuase it can add to tourism revenue.
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