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장지혁/2024-07-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think students shoud not skip the school because they have to study what they skipped and they can get more stress because their parents will be angry with them

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry! I agree. Missing school means having to catch up on missed work and dealing with added stress from disappointed parents. Good job! ^^

~ Teacher Maxine

I think students shoud not skip the school because they have to study what they skipped and they can get more stress because their parents will be angry with them

>> I think students should not skip school because they have to catch up on what they missed, and it can lead to more stress when their parents become angry with them.