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Do you think reading the newspaper should read the news?

차유진/2024-07-18

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There are news, advertisements, etc in newspaper, I think the most important part is news. So I think reading newspaper should read the news.
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Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night!  


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                       Do you think children should read the news in the newspaper?


There are news, advertisements, etc in newspaper, I think the most important part is news.
>> There are news, advertisements, etc. in newspapers, and I think the most important part is the news.

So I think reading newspaper should read the news.
>> So I think children should read newspapers, especially the news. 

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