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What would you choose if you could have a senses-related superpower? Would you choose hearing superp

차진혁/2024-07-18

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I would choose hearing superpower if I could have a senses-related superpower because I want to talk with my family more. And I have to hear TV and game sounds.
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Hello, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from yesterday's homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Catch you tomorrow! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




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I would choose hearing superpower if I could have a senses-related superpower because I want to talk with my family more.
>> OR: If I could have a senses-related superpower, I'd choose the hearing superpower because it would be easier to contact my family more.

And I have to hear TV and game sounds.
>> And I would hear TV and game sounds easily.
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