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Would you prefer language lessons one-to-one or do you like having other students around?

김영순/2024-07-18

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Basically, I like both of them. It's better choosing to depend on the situation. For me,I used to find other students around and I didn't have them. So,I had to choose language lesson one-to-one online. I think that the best way to learn language is having one- to-one lesson and conversation with them to practise every day.

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Hi Young Soon!
Take note of the vocabulary words used.
They can be helpful in writing your future compositions.
See you soon!^^
~ Teacher Sharon

Basically, I like both of them.

>> Correct
It's better choosing to depend on the situation.

>> It's better to choose depending on the situation.
For me,I used to find other students around and I didn't have them.

>> For me, I used to look for classes with other students but I couldn't find any.
So,I had to choose language lesson one-to-one online.

>> So, I had to choose language lessons one-to-one online.
I think that the best way to learn language is having one- to-one lesson and conversation with them to practise every day.

>> I think that the best way to learn language is having one- to-one lesson and conversations with others to practise every day.