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문도현/2024-07-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I'm also facing so many challenges. I don't think better than other people. I just do my best the works given to me. I'd like to just say 'cheer up!'

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Mun!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I'm also facing so many challenges.

>>I'm also facing many challenges.

2. I don't think better than other people.

>>CORRECT!

3. I just do my best the works given to me.

>>I just do my best with the work given to me.

4. I'd like to just say 'cheer up!'

>>I'd just like to say, 'cheer up!'