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문도현/2024-07-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I imagine a result when I finally do it. And I think that if I don't give up this situation, I will get good results. I do mind control myself.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Mun!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I imagine a result when I finally do it.

>>I imagine the result when I finally do it.

2. And I think that if I don't give up this situation, I will get good results.

>>I think that if I don't give up on this situation, I will get good results.

3. I do mind control myself.

>>I do mind control. (*you don't have to add the word 'myself' because it is already understandable that you are doing it yourself)