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What kind of TV programs do Korean kids watch these days? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-07-16

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I think Korean kids watch YouTube a lot these days If watch a lot of YouTube, eyes are not good I think it would be better to read a book than to watch YouTube.
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Hello, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good one!  


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Jean~~




                What kind of TV programs do Korean kids watch these days? Explain your answer.


I think Korean kids watch YouTube a lot these days 
>> I think Korean kids watch YouTube a lot these days. 

If watch a lot of YouTube, eyes are not good
>> Watching a lot of YouTube videos might damage my eyesight. 

I think it would be better to read a book than to watch YouTube.
>> OR: I prefer reading books to watching YouTube. 
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