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Has your boss ever told you to do something unethical? Did you do it?

김일환/2024-07-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, he hasn't. My boss is an ethical person. When someone need to do something enethical, he would do it. Last year, A teacher want to buy our product. The teacher paid more money than the price of our product, and then he wanted to get a refund for the extra amount he paid. It's illegal in Korea. We needed to make cash for the refund. At first, he agonized about doing it or not for a long time. Finally he decided to do it himself. I don't how did make the cash, but he did it. He is a man of strong responsibility.
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Thanks for being very diligent with regard to your homework. Please take a moment to reflect on some corrections given below.
- Teacher Angela


No, he hasn't. My boss is an ethical person. 
>> CORRECT

When someone need to do something enethical, he would do it. 
>> When someone needs to do something unethical, he would do it.

Last year, A teacher want to buy our product. The teacher paid more money than the price of our product, and then he wanted to get a refund for the extra amount he paid.
>> Last year, a teacher wanted to buy our product. The teacher paid more money than the price of our product and then requested a refund for the extra amount that he had paid.

It's illegal in Korea. We needed to make cash for the refund. 
>> It's illegal in Korea. We had to provide cash for the refund.

At first, he agonized about doing it or not for a long time. 
>> At first, he agonized over whether to do it or not for a long time.

Finally he decided to do it himself. 
>>  Finally, he decided to do it himself.

I don't how did make the cash, but he did it. He is a man of strong responsibility.
>> I don't know how he made the cash, but he did it. He is a man of strong responsibility.
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