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이상도/2024-07-16

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HOMEWORK: Do you think skin color can tell our body condition? I think that's enough. A typical example is jaundice, which refers to a phenomenon in which toxic ingredients make the entire body sick when tired or having a liver problem, causing the skin color, especially the color of the face, to turn yellow. This helps us to anticipate disease or predict fatigue, especially in newborns.
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Hi again, Mr. Lee!
This is a very typical observation among newborns. and I am surprised that you who ar in the field of computers know about this. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Enjoy the rest of your day!
T. Aki~


I think that's enough.
>>> I think that's good enough to see some conditions in our body.

A typical example is jaundice, which refers to a phenomenon in which toxic ingredients make the entire body sick when tired or having a liver problem, causing the skin color, especially the color of the face, to turn yellow.
>>> A typical example is jaundice, which refers to a phenomenon in which toxic ingredients make the entire body sick when tired or have a liver problem, causing the skin color, especially the color of the face, to turn yellow.

This helps us to anticipate disease or predict fatigue, especially in newborns.
>>> CORRECT!
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