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류건우/2024-07-15

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Q: If you will be smartest in the world, what field do you want to focus on and why? A: I think I will focus on space science or AI fields. People only know few about the space, and the space is where we might live in the future, so I think it's important. Also, AI is developed a lot nowadays, so I think it would also be important.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think I will focus on space science or AI fields.

>>I think I will focus on the fields of space science or AI.

2. People only know few about the space, and the space is where we might live in the future, so I think it's important.

>>People only know a few things about space, and it's where we might live in the future, so I think it's important.

3. Also, AI is developed a lot nowadays, so I think it would also be important.

>>CORRECT!