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What can foreigners do for fun in your hometown?

박소은/2024-07-13

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Maybe, because it is not his of her hometown so maybe it can be hard to feel fun in our hometown. If that person had been long time ago in my country maybe that person can have fun in our hometown.
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Maybe, because it is not his of her hometown so maybe it can be hard to feel fun in our hometown.
>> Maybe because it is not his of her hometown, it might be hard to have fun in our hometown.
If that person had been long time ago in my country maybe that person can have fun in our hometown.
>> If that person has stayed in our country for a long time, he or she may have fun in our hometown. 
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