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How may we overcome laziness when dealing with an important matter?

현무/2024-07-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

If it's an important issue, you can't be lazy. Being lazy means it dont important . but I lose concentration, I take a short break. Have a cigarette or play a game.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Kyle! Job well done in today's homework. You gave an explanation and it was more than just one sentence. Keep it up!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

If it's an important issue, you can't be lazy.
>> If it's an important issue, you can't be lazy.

Being lazy means it dont important .
>> Being lazy implies it isn't important.

but I lose concentration, I take a short break. Have a cigarette or play a game.
>> However, if I lose concentration, I take a short break, have a cigarette, or play a game.