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In what ways are dogs helpful to humans? Explain.
김영순/2024-07-12
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I had a dog for many years.
She was a Yorkshire terrier who named Minky.
I remember that I was happy with her.
When I walked my dog,we were communicating each other.
I felt she made me stabled.
In my experience,
a dog is helpful for human in part of mental health like emotional communication and stability.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
Good job!
The patterns of yours sentences are definitely gaining more clarity.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I had a dog for many years.
>> Correct
She was a Yorkshire terrier who named Minky.
She was a Yorkshire terrier who named Minky.
>> She was a Yorkshire terrier named Minky.
I remember that I was happy with her.
I remember that I was happy with her.
>> Correct
When I walked my dog,we were communicating each other.
When I walked my dog,we were communicating each other.
>> We often communicated with each other while taking a walk.
I felt she made me stabled.
I felt she made me stabled.
>> I felt that she kept me stable.
In my experience, a dog is helpful for human in part of mental health like emotional communication and stability.
In my experience, a dog is helpful for human in part of mental health like emotional communication and stability.
>> In my experience, a dog is helpful to humans concerning mental health like emotional communication and stability.
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