POWER ENGLISH

현재위치

> 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

July 10th's homework

안연희/2024-07-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

It’s my favorite not only because I like the rich taste of meet but I also like friendly service of the staffs. I love this restaurant because Suksungdo does not only offer rich taste of meet but also friendly service of the staffs.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Yeon Hee,

I'd definitely try aged meat as well! Sounds delicious! ^^

-Teacher Ash

It’s my favorite not only because I like the rich taste of meet but I also like friendly service of the staffs.

>> It’s my favorite not only because I like the rich taste of meat, but I also like the friendly service of the staff.

I love this restaurant because Suksungdo does not only offer rich taste of meet but also friendly service of the staffs.

>> I love Suksungdo because this restaurant does not only offer the rich taste of meat but also the friendly service of the staff.