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정일환/2024-07-12

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Q : Did you have any concerns or fears about changing jobs? How did you overcome them? A : When I first moved, I was afraid, but now I don't. Overcoming the fear is ultimately up to my mindset.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Steve! I'm glad to hear you've overcome that initial fear! It sounds like you've developed a strong mindset.

~ Teacher Maxine

When I first moved, I was afraid, but now I don't.

>> When I first moved, I was afraid, but now I'm not anymore.

Overcoming the fear is ultimately up to my mindset.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Overcoming the fear ultimately depends on my mindset.