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Peacock

이창노/2024-07-12

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Hi Andrea I agree peacock is beautiful bird. Peacock feathers is very beautiful. So I always surprise when I watching peacock. And Peacocks is very mysterious when peacocks flying. I also like parrot. Because sometimes parrot is said. It's very amazing. So I like peacock and parrot.

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Hi Matthew! ^^

I wasn't able to talked to you for three days already.

I hope you are okay.

Hope to talk to you on MOnday.

Andrea

I agree peacock is beautiful bird.

>> I agree that the peacock is the most beautiful bird.

Peacock feathers is very beautiful. So I always surprise when I watching peacock.

>> Peacock's feathers are very beautiful so I am surprised when I watch them.

And Peacocks is very mysterious when peacocks flying.
>> Peacocks are also very mysterious when they fly.

I also like parrot. Because sometimes parrot is said.

>> I also like parrots because they sometimes talk.

It's very amazing So I like peacock and parrot.

>> They are amazing so I like both parrots and peacocks.