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What's your favorite movie genre? Why?

차진혁/2024-07-11

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My favorite movie genre is Korean historical movie because I like Korean history. My favorite Korean historical movie is "Myungryang", the movie's main character is admiral Yi Sun-shin. But there are not many Korean historical movies, so it's too bad.
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Good evening, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from Wednesday's homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as capitalizing the word "Admiral" when it is used as the title of a person. Good night! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                  
                      What's your favorite movie genre? Why?


My favorite movie genre is Korean historical movie because I like Korean history.
>> My favorite movie genre is the Korean historical kind because I like Korean history.

My favorite Korean historical movie is "Myungryang", the movie's main character is admiral Yi Sun-shin.
>> My favorite Korean historical movie is "Myungryang" with Admiral Yi Sun-shin as the main character. 

But there are not many Korean historical movies, so it's too bad.
>> But there are not many Korean historical movies, so it's disappointing.

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