I prefer winter vacation because summer vacation is too short to feel pleasure, but winter vacation is long, so I can do what I want or relax.
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I prefer winter vacation because summer vacation is too short to feel pleasure, but winter vacation is long, so I can do what I want or relax.
>> I prefer winter vacation because summer vacation is too short to fully enjoy. Winter vacation is longer, allowing me to do what I want or simply relax.