/2024-07-11
ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Da Hye,
Great job! You explained your thoughts clearly
and provided insightful reasons. Understanding how experiences shape our lives
is crucial. Keep thinking deeply about these topics and continue your excellent
progress!
~Teacher Cathy
I believe
that the rich get richer and the poor get poorer.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
believe that rich people get richer and the poor become poorer.
When
people become adults, I think childhood memories have a lot of influence.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Childhood
memories greatly influence people when they become adults.
So
people who are frustrated or depressed by a single failure are more likely to
be poor.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Those
who get frustrated or depressed by a single failure are more likely to stay
poor.
The
rich have faith and hope for the future that they will do well even if they
suffer from failure.
>>CORRECT
OR>>On
the other hand, the rich maintain faith and hope for the future, believing they
will succeed even after a failure.
I
think this reason comes from their rich heart and relaxation.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
think this mindset comes from their rich hearts and sense of relaxation.
So, I
think that the reality of not trying because there is no hope and expectation
for the future makes poor get poorer, and that rich minds, leisure, and rich
bundles of money make rich get richer.
>>So,
I think that the reality of not trying, because there is no hope and
expectation for the future, makes the poor get poorer, and that rich minds,
leisure, and wealthy resources of money make the rich get richer.