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조수희/2024-07-11

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A fantastic day to you MS. JULIA~!^^ Thanks for writing your first essay. You have effectively presented your ideas it an effective way Keep it up! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Keeping pets is good for children. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>> Petting is good for children. 
For example it gives children comfortable feeling.
>>>For example, it provides children with a sense of comfort.
 I see only one child family living with pet. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But I think keeping pet is dangerous.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 And pet could bite the children.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 It might happen an allergy to children. 
>>> It may cause them to have allergies too.

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