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이상도/2024-07-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
HOMEWORK: Should your government impose a speaking class in English as early as kindergarten? I don't think that's necessary. I think Korean is a must to learn in kindergarten. English is not a must. I think children who are not mature are fast to learn, but on the other hand, they also forget quickly. If you learn English without being good at Korean, you may be good at English, but your Korean will be poor. I don't think that's a very good thing. It is not too late to learn English or another language after learning Korean enough.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good day, Mr. Lee!
Contrary to what others believe, our minds can adapt to changes. for example, if we are learning two languages at the same time, our brain can process and sort that this language is Korean and this is English. There is an advantage of introducing English at an early age :) but of course, it is still the parents who will decide with that.
Great day ahead!
T. Aki~

Should your government impose a speaking class in English as early as kindergarten?

I don't think that's necessary.
>>> CORRECT!

I think Korean is a must to learn in kindergarten. English is not a must.
>>> CORRECT!

I think children who are not mature are fast to learn, but on the other hand, they also forget quickly.
>>> I think children who are not mature are fast to learn, but on the other hand, they also forget quickly

If you learn English without being good at Korean, you may be good at English, but your Korean will be poor.
>>> CORRECT!

I don't think that's a very good thing.
>>> CORRECT!

It is not too late to learn English or another language after learning Korean enough.
>>> CORRECT!
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