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Snacks I can't resist

양기연/2024-07-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I order coffee in a coffee shop, it is hard for me to skip some cakes. I don't usually like to have cakes, but when at a coffee shop, I always order some. Especially I enjoy a carrot cake, chocolate mousse cake, or tiramisu cake. With it, drinking a cup of coffee or tea makes me happy 😊
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Gi Yean!
I can really see that you find cakes irresistible at cafes. It's funny that you try to avoid caffeine but still enjoy it, which even makes you crave cakes.
- T. Caitlyn
When I order coffee in a coffee shop, it is hard for me to skip some cakes. 
>> When I order coffee in a coffee shop, it is hard for me to resist ordering some cakes.
I don't usually like to have cakes, but when at a coffee shop, I always order some. 
>> CORRECT
Especially I enjoy a carrot cake, chocolate mousse cake, or tiramisu cake. 
>> Especially, I enjoy carrot cake, chocolate mousse cake, or tiramisu cake.
With it, drinking a cup of coffee or tea makes me happy 
>> CORRECT
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