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김순님/2024-07-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If the bad situation happens to me , I will avoid that. I don't want to ruin my trip. So I am trying to put up with that situations. In fact, other people except my family don't seriously affect to my emotion. Sometimes I didn't talk people who hurt my emotion while our travelling. I realized how much I was foolish.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Sunny!
Anything can ruin a good trip. it just depends on how you handle it. will it ruin the whole trip or ignore it (if possible)?
Enjoy the sunshine!
Aki~

If the bad situation happens to me , I will avoid that.
>>> I try to avoid bad situation that might happen to me.

I don't want to ruin my trip.
>>> I don't want that to ruin my trip.

So I am trying to put up with that situations.
>>>So I am trying to put up with that situation.


In fact, other people except my family don't seriously affect to my emotion.
>>> In fact,  I am not emotionally affected by other people except my family.

Sometimes I didn't talk people who hurt my emotion while our travelling.
>>> So sometimes, I don't talk to people about my emotions while we are on a trip.

I realized how much I was foolish.
>>> CORRECT!
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