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What are the advantages and disadvantages of being rich?

신봉규/2024-07-08

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I think that the advantages of being rich is that I have more time because I don't have to work. the disadvantages of don't having to work is helplessness

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Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you so much for taking the time to do the homework. Keep it up!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think that the advantages of being rich is that I have more time because I don't have to work. .
>> CORRECT
OR >> I believe that one advantage of being rich is having more free time since I don't need to work.

the disadvantages of don't having to work is helplessness
>> However, the disadvantage of not having to work is feeling helpless.