영작교정 첨삭 서비스

현재위치

Home > 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

What are the advantages and disadvantages of being rich?

현무/2024-07-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
i think being rich no disadvantages , Instead, you give up happiness or lose health when you become rich. it's disadvantages .
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kyle! Thank you for taking time to do the homework today. Great job! Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

i think being rich no disadvantages , Instead, you give up happiness or lose health when you become rich. it's disadvantages .
>> I think there are no disadvantages to being rich. Instead, one may sacrifice happiness or health upon becoming wealthy, which is a disadvantage.
이전글 목록 다음글