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What do you think of people who always work out, and how does this affect a person's mood?

이진태/2024-07-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Few years ago, I almost worked out for two to three days of week. I felt refresh and disappeared uncomfortable feelings that I recieved at work when I worked out. I recommend working out.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Thank you for sharing your ideas about working out. It's great when you take time to share your ideas. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Few years ago, I almost worked out for two to three days of week.
>>  A few years ago, I used to work out two to three days a week.

I felt refresh and disappeared uncomfortable feelings that I recieved at work when I worked out.
>> It made me feel refreshed and helped eliminate the uncomfortable feelings I experienced at work.

I recommend working out.
>> I highly recommend working out.
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