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김순님/2024-07-08

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Last summer vacation was worst in my life. I had a reservation a high-priced hotel for 2days. It was the first time I had reserved a luxury hotel. We went to there but my husband couldn\'t sleep there. During the 2night 3days . He went to Seoul twice . Because he didn\'t report his vacation officially. I was upset In addition I drove his car when I came back home. He took the train everytime .
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Ms. Sunny!
You are one of the kindest women I've ever met ^^. Have a good day!
Aki~


Last summer vacation was worst in my life.
>>>  Last summer vacation was the worst in my life.

I had a reservation a high-priced hotel for 2days.
>>> I had a reservation at a high-priced hotel for 2 days.

It was the first time I had reserved a luxury hotel.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>>  It was the first time I made a reservation in a luxury hotel.

We went to there but my husband couldn\'t sleep there.
>>>  We checked in but my husband couldn't sleep there.

During the 2night 3days . He went to Seoul twice .
>>>  During our trip for 3 days and 2 nights, my husband has to go back to Seoul twice.

Because he didn't report his vacation officially.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Becuase he didn't file a leave formwork.

I was upset
>>> CORRECT!

In addition I drove his car when I came back home.
>>> In addition, I have to drive his car back home.

He took the train everytime .
>> Because he took the train every time he went back to Seoul.

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